It is Nabil's photo.
Sabtu, 08 Oktober 2011
My Friend's Great Hobby
I have a nice friend who has a great hobby. Her name is Nabiilah Ramadhan. Her hobby is reading novel. She very likes reading novel, for she can get the true history. She usually reads a fiction novel, and she can read for two days for every novel. The most her favorite novel is Laskar Pelangi created by Andrea Hirata. Nabil usually buys a novel in Gramedia Matraman with her friend. I think she has a great hobby because she can get a lot of true history from that novel.
Langganan:
Posting Komentar (Atom)
It is me! It is me!
BalasHapusI think you miss a word 'day' in the sentence: "and she can read for two for every novel."
I guess you will write "and she can read one novel for two days."
oohhh..my goodness.
BalasHapusthanks a million Nabil, you remind me.
You are really my nice friend.
Yep Nabil, u a rite. It's good u state ur TS to make readers easily get the point on what u write. Well, I don't understand about the purpose of Nabil's reading hobby " she can get the true history" True history of what? U stated in ur writing if she loves reading 'fiction novel'. Be aware of the choice of words next time, ok! Waiting 4 ur better writing next time:-)
BalasHapus